On the brink between here and the darkening horizon
I solemnly stand.
As I'm watching you leave through these stormy eyes
I feel my heart bend.

Feelings we shared - I will not forget
Nor dismiss with regret.
But the pact has expired
Now the sun has set.

As your planned demise unfurls in my head
A mournful tear rolls from my eye
Oh how final was, that final goodbye.

By bad blood you've been chosen
When my people were frozen.
Now thawed from this prison
A nation has risen.

[[This is still unfinished, but I wanted to know if this is better structure wise ... Also, if you're going to have a few writers then maybe I could stick to my structures and we intertwine or something.
Last thing, It _might_ be easier for me to write free(er)-verse if I actually have music to attach it to. (Just thoughts)]]